Poem: There is a storm comin’ in

Ashok Subramanian
2 min readSep 10, 2022

Who would have expected that Sarah Polyakov would bring out wonderful digital artwork, and throw up a challenge like this? Here is her challenge, ad verbatim.

Anyone care to tell an intriguing story to go with my recent 3D piece?

I have been busy with my new novel ‘The Rainbow Bridge’, which encompasses storms and tempests in life. So the challenge was par for the course. Here is my composition of the poem with the same title. Hope you all enjoy the artwork and poetry.

“There’s A Storm Comin In” Copyright Sarah Polyakov — 2022 — MOVEIR

Poem: There is a storm coming

The green corn is not green anymore,

Just that they adorn a beautiful golden hue

As if they just became wiser and richer

The spring waters have turned turgid

Even the pleasant pool looks dark and deep

The birds are quieter, even silencing their nurslings

The mountains were brown and green

But they can feel the wet air from their heights

They stand tall, shivering yet majestic

Suddenly turn purple in anticipation.

Even the sun is working part-time

Hiding behind the grey clouds

A wistful breeze blows gently but with some force

Yet you float amid this change of scenery

That comes as nature changes its wardrobe

Like the green robes give into purple

A color of royalty — majestic and powerful

Your auburn hairs brush the unruly winds

Your hands invite me to jump right in

Pointing to the western skies

Where an army of clouds in formation

Preparing to invade the shivering mountains

The golden grass and the deep dark pond.

Your voice booms over the hollering of the wind

‘There is a storm coming in’

Those words swirl, spin, and splatter

Like those twisters that would come

With the violence of wind and thunder

Yet this would be a perfect storm

Not because you had flown in and forewarned

Because now you are with me, holding my hands

I just stand awestruck, like the lonely tree

Questions ring in my mind, as sharp darts fall

Are you the perfect messenger in purple?

Or the goddess they call Tempestas?

Drenched and disheveled, your auburn hair rustled

Your eyes twinkling like that lightning

Your feet twirling like the storm clouds

A dance that we start, as the storm passes

We kiss in those intense moments

Our quivering lips now locked,

Somewhere we lost the key

Deep down, we search and find

The much-needed calm, after the storm.

~Ashok Subramanian © 2022

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Ashok Subramanian
Ashok Subramanian

Written by Ashok Subramanian

A poetic mind. Imagines characters, plots. Loves Philosophy, Literature and Science. Poetry-Short Stories-Novels- Poetry Reviews-Book Reviews

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