Poem: The Unseen Beauty

Ashok Subramanian
2 min readJun 18, 2023

How can I not accept an invite from Sarah Polyakov when she adorns both the brush and the pen? I searched for my quill, that way I can just compliment my verses as a footnote to this magnificent artwork and poetry of hers.

Here is her artwork.

Unseen Beauty, Sarah Polyakov © 2023

Her poem represents her artwork to the tee.

Poem 1: Beauty Unseen

Beauty beyond realms unseen,
Is found within a woman’s dreams,
Her heart a canvas, pure and bright,
Filled with hope and endless light.

In her mind, a world takes shape,
Full of wonder, free of hate,
Where love and kindness reign supreme,
And beauty is more than what it seems.

For in her dreams, she sees the truth,
That beauty comes from within, the Root,
A gentle heart, a kind soul,
Can make the entire world glow.

So let us close our eyes and dream,
Of a world where love is queen,
And may our inner beauty shine,
Brighter than any gem divine.

(Poem and image by Sarah Polyakov, 2023)

My response was to write from the beholder’s point of view. Here it goes.

Poem: THE UNSEEN BEAUTY

( inspired by verse and artwork of Sarah Polyakov)

Do we believe in our inner eye?

This question I ask you with a sigh

The layers of our mental onion have to peel

Removing the curtains and for it to reveal

For the beauty that we see

Only surficial and skin deep

Of youth and the spring

The pleasant memories we can keep.

The beholding of beauty

A culminating experience

Fed by our five senses

Filtered by our feelings

But to see the beauty unseen

Become a butterfly

With No weights of lead,

But open mind like its wings

Letting our senses wander

Seeing things for what they are

An unfiltered assault on our senses

the bearing nakedness of our souls

For the nectar in the flowers lie deep

Beyond the beauty of the petals

A butterfly knows this well

Its search, a transaction of survival.

Her beauty is not her youth

her coyness is not all that she is

Her heart is where her real being lies,

The unseen, untethered beauty

that we can behold.

~Ashok Subramanian © 2023

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Ashok Subramanian
Ashok Subramanian

Written by Ashok Subramanian

A poetic mind. Imagines characters, plots. Loves Philosophy, Literature and Science. Poetry-Short Stories-Novels- Poetry Reviews-Book Reviews

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