Poem: The Summer Rains

Ashok Subramanian
3 min readApr 2, 2024

Some days, I can’t write poetry, because I become an ostrich. My head is buried in the sands of the day’s sand clock, immersed in the darkness that pervades the trenches of my work life. I have verses in my head that I haven't typed in. But a poem like this appears, and to my surprise, my reticent friend of these days, Priya Patel, responded with her verse. So, this turns out to be another quick duet.

Another point: even ostriches have hearts. The poems bring the beginning and the end of the yearning of the poets’ hearts together when poetry seldom happens but the hearts yearn for something warm like the early summer rains.

Poem: No Poetry Days

There are two types of poems. Some are crafted, and some are spontaneous (to find that all poems are not spontaneous is paradoxical, but that is true). They flow out of nowhere and sometimes start making sense as they are composed. The poem appears when a little white cloud passes along the azure sky on a summer afternoon. The mind is soaked in the deep end of work, yet, that snippet of thought, creates hope, that on this warm summer day, may bring poetry.

There are no poetry days.

Those days are normal.

The sun and the stars don’t inspire.

The days just pass by.

Like…those days in the past I can’t remember.

And there were people before who lived their lives…

Just like those normal days.

The stars and the sun…

They were there, like any other day.

Then…there were the poetry days.

My heart bled, ached and screamed

Or it soared like the candor

covering the sky with its wings

Then, the words come …

The verses about you

Dipped in my love

Written in my blood or tears

Happy tears too… Ah-

The crazy days when I am with you

Like the early summer rain

Waking up the petrichor

Sweet, pure and warm

Just my poetry days are born

~Ashok Subramanian © 2024

Only a poet understands the heart of a poet. The heart is what the heart says. Priya, my dear friend, and poet, came alive again with a wonderful response to ‘No Poetry Day’. The yearning of the heart to pour its words in poems, after all, a poet knows.

Poem: Summer Rain

Where did the poetry days go

the memories of the early summer rain

and dancing beneath the stars

riding all night on the midnight train

and running away towards Jupiter or Mars

then waiting to run home to write anxiously

about how I fell in love in the rain

Where did those poetry days go

why can’t we live in the stars again

My heart still does bleed

and the aches have come and gone

but the poetry of you

I hear in every love song

and I am forever reminded by the

memories of an early summer rain

~ ©️ Priya 🕉

The whole charade of trying not to think about … I fight the thoughts. If I build a dam, I drown in the deluge of thoughts. I finally gave up.

Poem: I Give Up, Now and Forever

No. I will not fight this

I have built dams and walls

But they don’t stand a chance

Thoughts about flood the plains of my heart

The deluge breaking the barriers of forgetfulness

My efforts are like a badly planned city

The storm water drains are clogged

I won’t fight this -

After all the floods are from the early summer rains

I feel the warmth of their flow

Letting the water stagnate and percolate

Into the bloods that reach my heart

And flow through my being

I give up, now forever

Drowned in the floods

The early summer rain of

Thoughts about you.

~Ashok Subramanian © 2024

“Just as the smell of the earth during a Summer rain… Oh, how lovely is to love and to be loved in return.”
Efrat Cybulkiewicz

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Ashok Subramanian
Ashok Subramanian

Written by Ashok Subramanian

A poetic mind. Imagines characters, plots. Loves Philosophy, Literature and Science. Poetry-Short Stories-Novels- Poetry Reviews-Book Reviews

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