Poem: The Magic of Life

Ashok Subramanian
3 min readNov 12, 2023

I am posting this as a journal rather than my compilation. My dear friend and prolific poet Priya Patel posted on her Facebook and Linkedin feeds. So I had to just mimic her post to create this piece. Here you go.

I wanted to start this beautiful day by sharing a collaboration of 3 poems between Author Ashok Subramanian and myself. As always, it was spontaneous writing and we are celebrating life and knowing that each of us is exactly where we are supposed to be; living each moment with the people we love in the best way we can … Priya

Here are the poems:

Poem: All I want

The simple things I want: Cocoa, books and cuddle. My laptop and my specs. The Nobel Prize for literature, of course.

All I want… Image by Ylanite Koppens from Pixabay

Life remains the same

Sometimes I wonder

What I am doing

Things I must do

Or things I should do

The things I have

Or the things I have not

Things I need

Or things I want

All I want are -

A cuddle

Some cocoa

All the books I can buy

A few books I shall read

And the many I shall write

For all others to read

And ah! I see that shiny thing

Nobel Prize for literature

Somewhere hidden

In my book rack!

~ Ashok Subramanian © 2023

Priya makes something out of everything. Something better and something about us. All she wants is our poetry, and forget the Prizes ( the Nobel or the Pulitzer). I gave the title…

Poem: A Few Verses Between Us

A few verses between us… Image by cromaconceptovisual from Pixabay

Life remains,

even as moments

gently pass us by;

moments that are dumped

away and quietly forgotten,

while others are magically

turned into spontaneous memoirs,

like the poetry we write between us

It’s easy to wander off and wonder also,

where am I, what am I doing,

or where am I supposed to be

Shannon Alder once said,

“The most confused you will ever get

is when you try to convince your heart

and spirit of something your mind

and heart knows is a lie”.

The truth is, we are where we are

supposed to be, doing what

we are supposed to be doing;

and while we may stumble

upon some rocky moments,

another more memorable one

is just a few words shy

of a poem between us

Pulitzer or not, I love waking up

to another poem to respond to.

~ Priya Patel © 2023

There is something magical about her verses that makes them about us. That is all we need — poetry between us. For me, that is the magic of my life. Our lives.

Poem: The Magic of Life

the Magic of Life …Image by Yuri from Pixabay

Letting go is easy

If it’s my breath

It’s not just air

But it is about hope

The moment I exhale

I hope the Universe

returns in kind

Providing me

The oxygen that I need

The act of letting go

Followed by the hope

When happens every moment

Everytime to everyone

Unnoticed by the living

Taken often for granted

This gift of life

This gift of life

When I let go of those verses

In the hope that

You will return yours

Like how we both

Write, hope, and reply

Like breath

Like the magic of life.

~ Ashok Subramanian © 2023

Believe in your heart that you’re meant to live a life full of passion, purpose, magic, and miracles.”
Roy T. Bennett, The Light in the Heart

The discovery of purpose between us is the magic of our lives.

~Ashok Subramanian © 2023

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Ashok Subramanian
Ashok Subramanian

Written by Ashok Subramanian

A poetic mind. Imagines characters, plots. Loves Philosophy, Literature and Science. Poetry-Short Stories-Novels- Poetry Reviews-Book Reviews

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