Poem: Our Soul Blues

Ashok Subramanian
1 min readOct 26, 2023

The pain of war affects mothers and their children. Imagine a mother’s soul suffering the blues of the war, and looking at it every day. Either side loses when it comes to the mother’s suffering. No war is worth it.

Poems: Our Soul Blues

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The blues of my soul reaching

The depths of my motherhood

Like the immortal glaciers

Till now, it was simmering beneath

Now, coming to the surface

Silent but still violent

Oppression in uniform

Drawing an ever-shrinking line

Taking away their inches

Barb-wire fences and

Ten feet high walls

Guarded with guns

Forget an olive branch offer

Wrecking whole olive orchards

But worse — we will suffer today

But they are stealing our tomorrow

A perfect little one I made

The sprouts of this soil

They will stay rooted

Look around what they love

The azure sea and the blue sky

Our perfect tomorrow

Can’t be erased today or ever

Bring the honest peace

Let us all go home

Or whatever is left

Our children are waiting

To erase the blues of our soul.

~Ashok Subramanian © 2023

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Ashok Subramanian
Ashok Subramanian

Written by Ashok Subramanian

A poetic mind. Imagines characters, plots. Loves Philosophy, Literature and Science. Poetry-Short Stories-Novels- Poetry Reviews-Book Reviews

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