Poem: Little Unseen Things for Love

Ashok Subramanian
2 min readMay 20, 2022

Another inspired poetry based on ‘Unseen’, by Sarah Polyakov, 2022.

The feeling of love fades over time. It is difficult for the lovers to keep at it, and the lessons are there from Nature. Nature relies on seasons and love relies on reasons — the purpose for love. And the little unseen things. This poetry is crafted as a conversation between a honey-eyed girl who has lost her love, and her grandmother who walks beside her, sharing her wisdom.

‘Unseen’ by Sarah Polyakov, © 2022

She stood at the edge of the garden

Fresh spring and smiling blooms

With her walked her grandmother

Slow and withered, leaning on a walking stick

Asked her grandmother, to kill her silence mere,

‘Why are you sullen and withdrawn, my dear?’

Tears swelled in her honey-colored eyes

‘Nana, life is gone from our lives

We exist and breathe, but walk dead’

‘Like walking below the starless sky

In still air and moonless night’

‘Standing lonely in the desert

In the blazing summer bright’

‘He stares at the Mac or watches the Bowl’

‘Whenever I taunt or try, he returns a scowl’

The little pranks, the snuggles, and the pecking kiss

Are long gone, what did we miss?’

‘If only we could breathe fire into the dying embers

Of the love and the breezy past that we remember’

Her sighs dissolved in the fresh spring air

‘Dear, my dear child’, said the grandmother

‘Even this beautiful nature has its seasons

Pray, tell me, what might be the reason?’

‘Winter and summer, autumn and spring’

Change is the only permanent thing’

‘Even the new shiny and star-crossed love

Like the fresh and flowery paper on the walls

Fades away with time, slowly and somehow

Discolored and torn, lovelife is worn

Exposing the frailty of the real human inside

Fickle are the moments, fickler are the memories’

‘Take a little bit of stardust,

Add a bit of life and then love

Store it in our skin and bones,

Let it mature like fine wine

That is what we are and

That is what we are supposed to be ’

‘Nature is eternal, flowers aren’t;

Dear, Love is eternal, lovers aren’t’

‘If nature needs seasons to refresh and revive

Love needs reasons to keep the romance alive.’

‘Rekindle the dying fire — some new pranks and capers

Tear down the old and put up a new wall paper’

Reminded the grandmother ‘It is always the unseen little things’

‘That gives the love birds their wings’.

It dawned on the honey-eyed girl clear

After the words of wisdom from grandmother dear.

~ Ashok Subramanian

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Ashok Subramanian
Ashok Subramanian

Written by Ashok Subramanian

A poetic mind. Imagines characters, plots. Loves Philosophy, Literature and Science. Poetry-Short Stories-Novels- Poetry Reviews-Book Reviews

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