Poem: Being There For Me

Ashok Subramanian
2 min readApr 23, 2023

I was depressed with work. Work satiates me fast because it depends on others. When the words of business become black and white, it is like walking thirsty under the hot sun in a desert. I look for an oasis, a place from which I can compose some poetry.

My friend in need and fellow poet stands like a rock, and obviously, I lay the blame on her, to run away from my woes.

Being there for me: Image by Caity from Pixabay

Poem: The Walls still stand

I want to be aloof

Ignoring the walls

That you have built

But my heart seldom listens

Pines for those good days

Of breeze that blew

From my side to yours

Your side to mine

But the wall you built

Has blocked the breeze

Do I listen to my heart

Or just let the wall be

In today’s world

The later is better

I shall let my heart

Ache silently

As the wall still stands.

~Ashok Subramanian © 2023

Priya understands my pulse. She knows that I just want her attention and that the poem means nothing. She holds a positive line in response saying that she is always around. She is a gem, isn’t she?

Poem: I am right there

You flutter in unicorn dreams

of butterflies and blossoms

between rainbow seams

beaming with colors

whenever you think of me

and I? I’m right there

tickling your heart strings

holding your hand

listening as the birds sing

our love song.

~ ©️ Priya 🕉

She knows how to set the mood for my response, and I did rather cheerily.

Poem: Just your thought

All I had to do

To think of you

Like a spark that flares

Into an insatiable fire

As if with a vengeance

A dearth-less spring

A volley of verses

Of love and loss

An endless rainbow

Ending a season

Of blank screens

And empty minds.

~Ashok Subramanian © 2023

Priya by now knew that I had recovered and was in my poetic elements. I wrote one last piece, acknowledging her wisdom. Her silence between these two poems is her wisdom. So I wrote this final piece.

Poem: You make sense

You said I never smile.

Today I smiled.

Just a curve of lips

And a puff of my cheeks

Hairy and all that.

Felt like a flower

The stubble face

A thorny flower

It felt light

Ah that’s how

Thr flowers must feel

Light and easy

Within, somewhere.

Then somebody saw me smile.

They smiled.

Like how a spark

Lights another

Now you make sense indeed.

~Ashok Subramanian © 2023

Sometimes, when we are down, it is not wrong to reach out. All it needs is the silent presence and a few words of wisdom that will bring sense to our lives. This tag-poetry is a testimony to such a situation.

~Ashok Subramanian © 2023

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Ashok Subramanian
Ashok Subramanian

Written by Ashok Subramanian

A poetic mind. Imagines characters, plots. Loves Philosophy, Literature and Science. Poetry-Short Stories-Novels- Poetry Reviews-Book Reviews

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