Poem: A fish in a stream ( A fish in a dream)

Ashok Subramanian
3 min readDec 17, 2023

‘A fish’s dream’ is the title close to my heart. Sarah Polyakov’s art is ever-expansive, and this abstract artwork titled ‘Fish in the Stream’ inspired me to write a couple of verses. The first one is a watcher’s wish that the fish survives its journey along the colorful (polluted) stream. The second is a set of dreams by a fish traveling along the stream. Then I found another poem, coincidentally by Priya Patel under the title ‘Ocean Tales’, resonating with the artwork of Sarah.

Poem 1: A fish in a stream

Fish in the stream : Artwork by Sarah Polyakov © 2023

Colorful waters of today

The hues of human industry

Flowing past with reluctance

Just enough to remind us.

Clear, sparkling waters

Flowed in this swirling stream

Like how time went past

Those memories remain in dreams.

Beautiful fish wriggled and danced

Gold and orange, yellow and purple

A source of meditative trance

Invisible today in the colorful turple

I spot the beautiful golden fish

Still swimming strong as in the past

To find its clear waters, I wish

Through this journey, it shall last.

~Ashok Subramanian © 2023

Poem 2: A fish in the dream

I dream –

Orange and yellow,

blue and green

Colorful vicissitudes for

A fish in the stream.

I dream –

The curls and twists

Of the whirlpools and waves

Like the human trapeze for

A fish in the stream.

I dream –

of sunlight bright and clear

To see the bottom so near

As I plunge into the depths as

A fish in the stream.

I dream –

Touch the moon and

Play with the stars

Like the white spongy fish

That swim in the sky unlike

A fish in the stream.

I dream –

To walk on the land

Feel the beautiful breeze

Savor the greens

Smell the soil

Feel the rain

Sometimes the shine

Feel a bit dry and high unlike

A fish in the stream.

I dream –

Of timeless twirls

Gurgling bubbles

An immortal journey as

A fish in the stream.

I dream –

Of the endless realm

Of the watery heaven

That pervades this planet

To last forever and ever as

A fish in the stream.

~Ashok Subramanian © 2023

Poem 3: Ocean tales

I am all the universe
in one small ocean;
sun, moon, stars
and everything in between
Slow and soft,
I swim through each day
like a shimmering goldfish
exploring in the deep

Yesterday I was a stream
then a gurgling brook
of nonsence and laughter
In a blink of the eye,
I became a quiet wave
fiercely rising,
ready to crash and burn;
ready to wash away
any sadness or pains
so I can shimmer
like a goldfish in the deep

Today I am quiet
perhaps tomorrow
I will laugh again

© Priya, 12/16, 🕉

Hope you all enjoyed the poems as we journey towards the last couple of weekends of this year.

~Ashok Subramanian

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Ashok Subramanian
Ashok Subramanian

Written by Ashok Subramanian

A poetic mind. Imagines characters, plots. Loves Philosophy, Literature and Science. Poetry-Short Stories-Novels- Poetry Reviews-Book Reviews

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